love

[cacian]

it is delicate
love
made of duplicates
layers of feelings
indicate

it renews
to avoid
blue
it likes to have
something to do

to keep above
the new
and it has more
than few
it has you falling
all over the pew

wedding bells
head over heel
spells
and anything that sells
happyness a tale

love is well
that ends well

[PeterL]

Lovely, nicely done.
And love is just a four letter word.

[YesNo]

I like the twist on "all's well that ends well" at the end.

[cacian]

Lovely, nicely done.
And love is just a four letter word.
thank you Peter :)
what is your take ??
including the first line
and love is just a four letter word..


I like the twist on "all's well that ends well" at the end.
YesNo thank you :)

[PeterL]

Love varies from person to person and from time to time. On one level love is just neurotransmitters stimulating the brain and body in peculiar ways, but without it there would be no people, and it inspries much more. I think that you caught the variability quite nicely.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IjIPvClNGIE

[Danik 2016]

Cacian,
Your poems move like a dance, they remind me of a roundel.This one has an ironic movement in spite of the "happy end". I like especially the "over the pew falling" part of it.

[cacian]

Love varies from person to person and from time to time. On one level love is just neurotransmitters stimulating the brain and body in peculiar ways, but without it there would be no people, and it inspries much more. I think that you caught the variability quite nicely.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IjIPvClNGIE
Peterl thanks for the link.
never heard the song before but it is lovely.

Cacian,
Your poems move like a dance, they remind me of a roundel.This one has an ironic movement in spite of the "happy end". I like especially the "over the pew falling" part of it.

Danik an interesting name :)
thank you for the lovely comments .

[Scheherazade]

It is "more than few" and "head over heel".