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tallonrk1
04-01-2016, 05:06 PM
The trees in Oakland smell like semen this time of year,
attracting the bees
to risk their endangered existence once again.
The birds take the highest nest,
chirping down at the bees
who roll around in pollen.
Spring always does this to people:
makes us remember the birds and the bees.

Because it’s Spring
and the bees
want to ****
the semen trees,

and the birds
flap their wings
and chirp their words

and we are meant to
listen.

But come nighttime,
the trees return to silence,
not yet hot enough
for cicadas
to become birds of the dark.

Again, I find myself in Josh’s room.
This nightly occurrence. His bed
reminds me of a tree branch—
the way it cradles his body,
like a hand
with an open palm.

“Goodnight, bud”
he says to me
as I look out the window—
Oakland is so dark
now. So fragile.

If I tried to climb the trees
now, the branches would snap
like arms of a mannequin.

Flower buds
would fall to the sidewalk
and be stepped on
come sunrise.

Because it’s Spring
and the bees
want to ****
the semen trees,

and the birds
flap their wings
and chirp their words,

and I can’t help but
listen.

Delta40
04-01-2016, 06:48 PM
Good blend of thoughts. The closing line suggests you're at nature's mercy.

cacian
04-02-2016, 11:56 AM
i could never compare a tree to that myself
a tree is pungent and rich in scents nothing like you are trying to suggest,

ennison
04-03-2016, 06:38 AM
If that comparison seems right to you I'd see a doc pronto tonto

tailor STATELY
04-04-2016, 02:07 PM
Interesting poem.

My summary: Springtime longing/The birds and the bees/Unrequited/Semen trees

Google: trees that smell like semen: https://www.google.com/search?num=100&newwindow=1&client=opera&q=trees+that+smell+like+semen+Oakland&oq=trees+that+smell+like+semen+Oakland&gs_l=serp.3...72608.74971.0.75928.8.8.0.0.0.0.0.0. .0.0....0...1c.1.64.serp..8.0.0.K-dIFmTvGhw

I didn't realize Oakland had these trees... but then I'm thinking Oakland, CA where I remember most the Eucalyptus trees. Pyrus calleryana: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pyrus_calleryana ... a beautiful tree - I may have missed them.

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY

Delta40
04-04-2016, 05:34 PM
Interesting poem.

My summary: Springtime longing/The birds and the bees/Unrequited/Semen trees

Google: trees that smell like semen: https://www.google.com/search?num=100&newwindow=1&client=opera&q=trees+that+smell+like+semen+Oakland&oq=trees+that+smell+like+semen+Oakland&gs_l=serp.3...72608.74971.0.75928.8.8.0.0.0.0.0.0. .0.0....0...1c.1.64.serp..8.0.0.K-dIFmTvGhw

I didn't realize Oakland had these tree... but then I'm thinking Oakland, CA where I remember most the Eucalyptus trees. Pyrus calleryana: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pyrus_calleryana ... a beautiful tree - I may have missed them.

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY

Lol. I enjoyed the idea there were such trees to drive the authors state of mind and what do you know? There is!