Rain

[MystyrMystyry]

sitting on a grassy hill
to observe the clouds
phantasmagoria of crazy
three ring circus
gallery of facial contortions
aliens freneticly twisting
into strange sea creatures


and then the rains


but under a tree
leafy lattice of lacy faces
vegetables from Venus
knights in battle
a galleon becomes
a faded photograph of
starship cruiser


and then it clears

[cacian]

beautifully composed
some lovely lines there
rain for sure an amasing phenomena
thanks for sharing
and must mention
phantagosmoria
and what a word haha :)

[MystyrMystyry]

Thankyou very much Cacian :)

[Gilliatt Gurgle]

Enjoyed it MM

[YesNo]

I liked "leafy lattice of lacy faces" although I have no idea what it means.

[MystyrMystyry]

Thankyou very much GG :)

[MystyrMystyry]

Thanks YesNo :)

It just means seeing faces in the leaves