angle

[cacian]

anger
makes life
a rectangle
no protractor
ever measures
its angle
loosen the bruise
to see
it difuse
the reasons
it accuse
to a mangle

[YesNo]

I liked the sound connecting "anger" and "rectangle". I don't understand "mangle" and the end, it sounds like it should fit.

[Danik 2016]

I like meaning and melody of this poem. We live in a world comprised between "anger" and the "mangling" of people and lives caused by this anger.

[PeterL]

When angry a few hours of angling can
Turn the world around. Angle worms can take the
Anger and the fish can eat the anger
Along with the worms. But some worms just drown.
Angle for something better, and fish is good.

[cacian]

thank you all very much for reading and feedback
Peter angling sounds pretty cool :)