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free
03-20-2016, 06:59 AM
Did you kiss me
To tell
Or to keep silent
About it

If to tell - how to tell
In rhymes and verses
Or in pictures
And music

If not to tell- how not to tell
When I am so happy
I am so delighted
For you kissed me
Twice

YesNo
03-20-2016, 07:58 AM
Nice, well structured poem.

The word "rhyms" should probably be "rhymes".

Jerrybaldy
03-20-2016, 06:19 PM
I love the delight at being kissed twice

free
03-23-2016, 02:37 AM
Nice, well structured poem.

The word "rhyms" should probably be "rhymes".

Thanks for the comment and correction. Done :)


I love the delight at being kissed twice


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