War Verse!

[Mohammad Ahmad]

War Verse
A message for Harry Potter I dedicate
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Heavy rain
Whispering winds
Hurricanes
Fire comes out of the earth
And lavas rolling over the river
Men, women turn naked
Blonder woman stands next door
Grasshoppers suddenly come to her fruits
Still worried to look out
And even her stripped feet
Maybe eaten
A child comes holding a candle
Another one on his cradle laughs
Ever it be glaring but on sun
A time the sun never sends its radiation
And it has to be trapped
On other wall of Geneva side
And it will come
Everyone had to have a horse to escape
And to bit the last bite of eve's pardon
Sky changes on diversely colours
Is it a doomsday?
But the pleasure yet on Hollywood seen
And markets exposing a new mortar
And the war on door
Besides marines of other forces
Here may face to face struggle
That's the war
And the harvest is
The cutting off skulls

[Delta40]

And the war on door grabbed me. I wonder if there is a war off door we can walk through.

[Mohammad Ahmad]

Thank you Delta passing on mine; it is out the source of our hands but simply it comes and already of our unpaid dues that's the idea I have to unveil its pathogenicity of the duration might strike on the area because of those I need not to mention names publicly. They are already breaking away the world laws and never could hear the sound of wisdom. The only thing I have is just this tongue of poetry carrying a verse may at least otherwise lest going on damaging the field of humanity.
Of course the area live in witnessing chaos and accumulative troubles never had we seen before.
I ask God protecting all nations and every source of life.

[Mohammad Ahmad]

Poem-2
Many were lost!
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We had it at a midnight
No nests to find
And nestlings being outside
All away in rain
Squawking to their mother
Yet aren't frightened
On their small mouths beaking the ground
Happy night dear nestlings
My pardon is yours
An anthill to them welcomed
And in that deserted place being lucky
Even no mother to find
And rain still comes down
A despaired night
There a woman came and asked
Isn't there any source of light?
I followed the marches to ever seen
A man tied a corpus of two souls
One is still alive
,other yet on the ground

[Delta40]

There is a mixture of past and present tense in your poem - which I enjoyed reading.

A man tied a corpus of two souls
One is still alive
,other yet on the ground

Good use of corpus.

[Mohammad Ahmad]

Thank you Delta dear friend
It is a good point you referred to
Joining between past and present this may point out that the matter yet undergoing the speculation of a writer to find a way could save the life's shame out.
In the last poem I intentionally referred to an implied paradox
Using new technique may help us or exactly help readers to enjoy