View Full Version : Life Told in Writing
M4ngo
02-21-2016, 12:04 AM
Untitled
every step
comes with air
of revelations—
pulsing
on the tip
there is
a grand stillness
with the stars
M4ngo
02-21-2016, 01:03 PM
Outside my window
I see the melancholy
drift—
the sad leaves free
of not knowing where to go
M4ngo
03-05-2016, 02:40 AM
those eyes—
harboring in the shadows
even in a bucket of sun
you can't escape
M4ngo
03-05-2016, 03:16 AM
I'll love you always
underneath the angelic dust—
even after I die
M4ngo
03-05-2016, 03:40 PM
New dawn splintered
a wink of enlightenment—
the Robin is singing
M4ngo
03-11-2016, 08:56 AM
Mornings come rushing
with slammed goodbyes—
regret and apologes consume
the hands of the clock
In the warm afternoon breeze
a dreaded smile waits—
remembering how it was
to once be anxious to see
The house ages
through the night
and creaks the memories
swept under the rug
Alone in the distance
she falls asleep beside me—
hoping to dream of waking up
the love anchoring us apart
Delta40
03-11-2016, 03:26 PM
I particularly like Sad Leaves and Anchored Mistakes. So much with very little.
M4ngo
08-18-2016, 03:50 PM
the shadow splinters
—ashes of deception
and ripples into mirrors
of stone
M4ngo
08-19-2016, 12:30 AM
Japanese honeysuckles
at the rope swing
—sweet invasion
M4ngo
09-13-2016, 10:41 AM
I'm in a warm confused blanket
peering at the still—
swarming thru this blink
M4ngo
09-30-2016, 12:46 AM
the autumn leaves
made a bed
—just for you
M4ngo
09-30-2016, 01:15 AM
warm rain of afternoon
breeze me in—
your solitude
M4ngo
11-30-2016, 02:53 AM
when the last
bloom of silence
fades
the cold-rose dusk
away,
the petals
drift
into a lullaby—
and rest easy
under our willow
M4ngo
11-30-2016, 05:13 AM
Arms folded to the moon
—in rainy dawn
What does she say
To the bird’s sad song of life?
Write my name in Solitude
O’ sweet angel above
In the cold rose dusk
Where your winds gently blow
How I wish I could know
O' how I wish I could know
M4ngo
10-14-2017, 06:29 AM
There is no simple road
and roses rarely bloom on forever—
M4ngo
10-14-2017, 06:32 AM
let go in the darkness
and
fall into the light
kiz_paws
10-14-2017, 05:57 PM
I really like the simplicity of your poetry.
And glad to see you posting, M4ngo! :)
M4ngo
09-12-2018, 04:26 AM
In a grand-stillness uncertainty slips
inspiring the moment and losing its grip—
leaving shadows in a bucket of sun
collapsing my thoughts left undone
M4ngo
09-12-2018, 04:36 AM
I really like the simplicity of your poetry.
And glad to see you posting, M4ngo! :)
Wow. Thank you!
sorry for the late reply :)
M4ngo
09-12-2018, 04:53 AM
I agree,
there is something
particularly special
—about you
how else
could you replicate
the same feeling
I get
when craving
ice cream
in the
middle
of the night
when I switch
on the light
to the kitchen
and I’m greeted
by the biggest
cockroach
I've ever seen
tailor STATELY
09-12-2018, 05:00 AM
Fun little poem... enjoyed. Perhaps "replicate" as a noun: "a tone one or more octaves above or below the given tone."
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY
tailor STATELY
09-12-2018, 05:01 AM
Duplicate bug... with long hairy antennae.
M4ngo
09-12-2018, 05:24 AM
Duplicate bug... with long hairy antennae.
Those bastids! The apache of bugs!
M4ngo
01-24-2020, 10:49 AM
silver light
unfolds at night
unbracing
as you fall—
stealing away the curtain
your disguise
now dripping shade
MANICHAEAN
01-25-2020, 08:40 AM
Simple and effective
Shadowlight
01-25-2020, 09:03 PM
Lovely, just lovely. Some beautiful imagery and turn of phrase here. Your haikus are delightful snippets of depth.
In particular like sad leaves and Write my Name in Solitude
M4ngo
01-26-2020, 12:24 PM
Thank ya’ll for the comments, much appreciated!
MANICHAEAN
01-28-2020, 02:54 PM
Keep at it. It's very pleasing to absorb.
M4ngo
04-17-2020, 10:54 AM
beyond the edge
of revelations—
sunlight drapes
linger on
tailor STATELY
04-29-2020, 02:16 AM
Wonderful... Veils of light beyond revelation... almost within reach :)
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
MANICHAEAN
04-29-2020, 02:53 AM
Loved it.
Powered by vBulletin® Version 4.2.2 Copyright © 2026 vBulletin Solutions, Inc. All rights reserved.