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Wilyem Clark
02-20-2016, 01:19 PM
The dancing piece of tissue paper
Obeys its own choreography
Flipflaps down the windy street
Caprioles in front of me
Dares me to catch it on the fly
Feints in a myriad airy ways
Kisses the pavement and scurries off.

YesNo
02-20-2016, 08:05 PM
I liked the description of the paper acting as if it were intentionally teasing you.

Alfonso Espada
02-29-2016, 01:42 PM
Does seem that way sometimes with life in general doesn't it?
In that sense the tissue paper can be viewed as a symbol or can even be easily transformed into an extended metaphor for life itself.

Thanks for sharing.