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Delta40
01-26-2016, 09:37 AM
Cracked skin
Sores
Bloodhound eyes
shed
salt free tears
that cake
dry
on your face
A C02 brain
mumbles
'water'
'water'
'water'
I wonder which
of us is the
vegetable
Now you're so
full of
fluid
you're like a
killer wail
as all childhood
memories
drown
and I realize
this means
you could go
any way
any day
any how

Haunted
01-26-2016, 12:27 PM
Reminds me of someone. So real.

tonywalt
01-26-2016, 01:08 PM
Excellent!

Hawkman
01-26-2016, 05:33 PM
Poweful stuff, Delta. Reminds me of a deathbed vigil...

Live and be well - H

Jerrybaldy
01-26-2016, 07:57 PM
Hope your fears arent realised x

Delta40
01-26-2016, 08:12 PM
Thanks everyone.