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Wilyem Clark
01-03-2016, 02:15 PM
The geese last night were chanting
As they flew high overhead:
Oh! So late . . . Oh! So late . . .
So late:
The frosts at last have glazed our lawns,
But brooks still gurgle, free of ice,
And winter coats still wear the dust
Their hangered exile has deposed.

cacian
01-04-2016, 12:34 PM
a fable of a read
enchantng :)

Haunted
01-04-2016, 06:26 PM
A winter delayed. The transition from outside to inside the closet is very nicely done. I hear and see the geese. I don't think you need to repeat and explain "So late" -- if the writing is good enough to carry the picture, and it clearly is.

tailor STATELY
01-04-2016, 08:03 PM
Enjoyed.

Curious to the use of the word "deposed".

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY

Wilyem Clark
01-05-2016, 11:57 AM
deposed == deposited
now considered somewhat archaic

The black sheep
01-15-2016, 09:28 PM
Very nice. I felt emotion with this