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Sumz Nini
12-24-2015, 02:32 PM
You told me that you fell in love,
Like Romeo to a Juliette,
to be a Rama to Sita..

Was it her fetching face.?
her catching voice.?

You said you wanted a kindred spirit.
to haul you in altruism,
and to hold you in benevolence.

Was it a simple glance,
a notion,
or a chemical
flashing through the nerves.
Tell me I don't know.
What love is I'll never know.

Like Sita & Rama
dare you say.
Rama doubted her
did not he.?
made her walk on fire.
so she did..
Was it love.?
tenderness.? endearment.?
Tell me I don't know..
What love is I'll never know.

Like Romeo,
would you die for her.?
he was insular and blind
so is she.
Was it real love.?
Intimacy.? infatuation.?
Tell me I don't know,
What love is I'll never know.....

YesNo
12-25-2015, 01:42 PM
It is nice to see Rama and Sita in the same poem with Romeo and Juliette. Sita's situation seemed puzzling to me also. Maybe it was just a plot technique to keep two people apart.

Sumz Nini
12-27-2015, 01:34 PM
Thanks for the comment YesNo.
Even though Rama,Sita & Romeo,Juliette are great literary masterpieces , they feel like absolutely ridiculous as love stories to me. :) (no offence)