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The black sheep
12-14-2015, 12:14 PM
I have never seen a black sheep before, but I know one
he was a rejected soul once his adolescent years had begun
All he ever fancied was to find his place in his family
but was cast to the wind as an Autumn leaf free-falling from a tree

Why was he treated as the odd child, he had yet to understand
though he grew up with that mentality even unto the stature of a man
another oddity was even years later he was not welcomed into his family fold
so he aged and aged with that mindset and still feel melancholy today, I'm told

He has children and grandchildren now and embraces them with "love" dedication
made a solemn oath to himself that he would shower them with unsurpassed "love" education
He did as he said he would, as his promises he was determined to keep
to this day not one of his offspring ever felt as he has, living as 'baa,baa' the black sheep

YesNo
12-14-2015, 05:01 PM
It is good that the black sheep loved his children and grandchildren. Why do you put "love" in quotes? Also, this does not seem to be in limerick form, but maybe I'm missing something.