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ErnestHorner
12-09-2015, 10:38 AM
The Rat Race

Get ready to go you're in the rat race
We're going to destroy this beautiful place

Fishermens' boats lay still in the bay
The fish are all gone I'm sorry to say

Rays from the sun can burn anyone
Can you not see what we have all done?

Sheds full of food just rotting away
While children are starving on this very day

Where are the jobs? They've gone too
What's for our children? What will they do?

Now is the time before it's too late
Tell the politicians to cut the red tape

YesNo
12-09-2015, 11:35 AM
The comma in the third line after "Fishermens'" does seem right.

The poem is a little vague, but I like the rhyme. What red tape are you referring to?

ErnestHorner
12-11-2015, 06:39 AM
There are many problems in the world not being addressed because of rules and regulations. Politicians need to spend more time acting and less time promoting their own careers. This is just my opinion. Merry Christmas!! :-)