ToastyRichard
12-07-2015, 02:53 AM
Feed back would be appreciated since its my first story.
The baron of Refrew
This ship, oh she was strong.
Carrying us quit far.
Bringing us fine ladies and gents from the land of the poets, headed north in the Atlantic.
We were a good crew
to her
the Baron of Refrew,
We are devoted, Even now on this calm eve September 1823.
Shalt she be put down 3000 fathoms beneath the sea.
To her final resting ground, the same fate as for you for me.
I recall Last fall, upon completion watching her set sail on her maiden voyage.
What a aw-inspiring moment
Thoughts of exploration; thoughts of glory.
BUT HARK!
ARE TIME IS limited; I wish you well beneath the sea
Like a great sailor once said "here’s to our wives and sweethearts, that never met" .
-Richard Larsen
The baron of Refrew
This ship, oh she was strong.
Carrying us quit far.
Bringing us fine ladies and gents from the land of the poets, headed north in the Atlantic.
We were a good crew
to her
the Baron of Refrew,
We are devoted, Even now on this calm eve September 1823.
Shalt she be put down 3000 fathoms beneath the sea.
To her final resting ground, the same fate as for you for me.
I recall Last fall, upon completion watching her set sail on her maiden voyage.
What a aw-inspiring moment
Thoughts of exploration; thoughts of glory.
BUT HARK!
ARE TIME IS limited; I wish you well beneath the sea
Like a great sailor once said "here’s to our wives and sweethearts, that never met" .
-Richard Larsen