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Mohammad Ahmad
11-23-2015, 08:11 AM
He follows me as a gazehound
Inside the shrubs and twisted jungles
Here its voice comes as a thunderbolt
A wild cat I tamed to be a close friend
Her cheek shines among the dewed shrubs
As a sunlight when inclined at dusk
Behind the hills my heart inclined there
Focusing on a matter still brings up in thoughts
My enemy is a friend when no sin ticks in fault
As a half-hunter can read without mistake
Whether in a stormy weather or even at rest
And I never felt it comes a rusted-watch
Slippery as a shadow of moonlights
Over the thin gravels driven by water
I used to name it, but still needing a time
Like a galloping mare warily clatters
Stubborn and never it had sleep.
To kill your thoughts you maybe a foolish
Thus my thought everlasting has been goring
Mistakenly has been gored or deliberately
As our wild- world, never it has truth

Mohammad Ahmad
11-23-2015, 10:41 AM
This one another poem just I write it now
He promised and yet he promises
Promised to be a friend at dark
But he stabs me once and again
To be wreathed in shape of yellowing wrath
To be a man of never oath
But to unaware torture me in his sins
As a turn over flag in wars
Here my battlefield as streets
It had never a crooked line
but always as my clear heart
Even in seas or in lands,
Yet I have an honourable flag
My Iraq I insert closely forward
And all enemies are just bubbles
In delusion carelessly they sleep,
Running over our emotions with each breeze
They keep on their ignorance,
feeling that our emotions are nonsense
but we have a good pen and sword.
Across all history we are men,
And our honour is the peace- hand to all

tailor STATELY
11-23-2015, 10:57 AM
And all enemies are just bubbles... this caught my fancy.

I believe I have read all of your poems... Your words sometimes evade me - perhaps due to my difficulties reading your syntax, but I feel your angst and frustration and love of country coming through.

Be safe. Be well. God bless Iraq.

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY

Mohammad Ahmad
11-23-2015, 12:20 PM
Hopping you will understand:
Before beginning in any reply let me obviously tell you that America since it invaded our country in 2003 under the pretext of fighting terrorism and promising that it will change everything better, America doesn't make any noticeable advantage but all what happen is just going for chaos and no promise has been achieved.
Yes, of course I feel so, because more than one or two or even ten try tumbling my country down in addition to the variant views of our politicians themselves.
Yes I am very afraid about my country but what to do just I am a writer writing here or there in English or in Arabic trying to keep my country recovering inside and outside.
I am from the Sunni sect and I deliberately surely writing on the forums, which no Sunni is present and just all members are from the Shiites sect just to make suitable between all Iraq nation, just to be no trouble or problem comes from here or there.
As you see the entire world now become boiling and the worse events maybe on their ways to come again making the region in additional complexities.
As we are men of litters, our first job is to defend the peace making the world in a great time of peace clearing out of enmity or any rancor between the overall religions whether on west or in east.
We have to close any window blowing from it any yellowish-darkened wind, we have to narrowing the gaps, however, it will be among any societies, and thus we do.
Our literature must be employed for peace and one of the reasons that putting on my shoulder this responsibility, I came here to this forum not to write just emotional words but to solve and treat many problems still need to be solved.
Yes where I go I must be the tongue of my country.
Thank you for reading and writing down a comment, but why you said that you find my language is difficult to be understood, no I think you understand it and if not you don't quote a clause from it.

again I thank you for this:
Be safe. Be well. God bless Iraq.

YesNo
11-23-2015, 03:29 PM
The phrase that tailor STATELY pointed out that enemies are bubbles was the one that stood out the most for me as well.

Mohammad Ahmad
11-23-2015, 04:23 PM
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