energy

[cacian]

when winter
is here
the sunshine is clear
it wants to be near
a leaf that flows
so as the wind
blows
it glows
energy shows
nature froze
intergalactic slows
when all threes go
to a night time mo
but amuse
to
dayiight
cruise
and life
renews
such is the truce
to all that accuse

[Mohammad Ahmad]

Let me a critic only for one time
It looks as a crossword, one comes from right other comes from left, one comes from up others from down but they are in present and simple tense following the fact of nature and no (figurative of speech) has been noticing, however, this poetry may we call the simple describing poetry as someone wants to enumerate from one to ten ….
To all that accuse …..happy words
When winter is here
The sunshine is clear, no it maybe cloudy

[PeterL]

When the Sunshine shrinks, need for other warmth
Grows, and friction can help. Rubbing against
One like you produces warmth without bright light.
That warmth will also amuse the rubbers,
And that produce even more warmth and light.