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Mohammad Ahmad
11-01-2015, 11:48 AM
Am I a man of spiritual love
then tendering for latest prove?
Or just wondering for a while
and go as weak as a small dove?
Here my body has been stabbed
And my eyes going staring and faded
Once I here you my verses
You fleshly dance and in my faith imagined
As a poem when no desirously has been written
No rhyme will be and no meter
Love is a poem written year after year
But is more sacred going near and near
Shall be then in one soul and one grave
Till God forgives and then separated

YesNo
11-02-2015, 09:56 AM
I liked the last four lines although I don't understand them. As I read them: love provides unity as two go toward one soul and one grave in a sacred journey of getting nearer until God forgives them and they are separated.

Mohammad Ahmad
11-03-2015, 07:30 AM
O dear reader let me explaining my poetry passion quietly for you discussing them between verses
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You fleshly dance and in my faith imagined
Here imagined = suspected on my faith against our pure love that I named in beginning ( spiritual love)
As a poem when no desirously has been written
No rhyme will be and no meter
( of course any thing you do without desire will not succeed)
Love is a poem written year after year
But is more sacred going near and near
(Here just due to the rhyme( blank) of course love somehow is sacred and easily and spiritually entering chests)
Shall be then in one soul and one grave
Till God forgives and then separated
Just I am here waiting the end, the end of anything after the sacred soul comes down to its source the ground and may God forgive then after forgiving the twin souls will separate other in a full enjoyment and quiet comfort