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Suffering
Wes Corona
10-23-2015, 04:13 PM
I know the pain,
Of icy rain.
It dwells within,
Beneath my skin.
YesNo
10-24-2015, 05:04 AM
Nice meter and rhyme. I suppose pain in general could feel as discomforting as icy rain.
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