For The Vine by Coolbroman

[coolbroman]

once there was a boy named squiggletons and he was MURDERED by his bro squattingtons

he was all like “wow bro im now a goste y u do dis” and his brother was like “wow spooky goste i have just the right thing” as he whipped out his gun

he shot the goste
nothing happened

spooky

the goste mr squiggletons said “wow that was rude why i am your brother” then his bro squattingtons said

“for the vine”

[UlyssesE]

Sorry, just not enough characterization, dialogue, and exposition for me to follow along. Perhaps a couple of re-writes, then you could submit another draft for consideration.