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cacian
08-30-2015, 09:13 AM
love is sporadic
it may behave
fanatic
emphatic pragmatic
it likes too much
of something
too quick
it runs out of fix

it falls apart
quits
it does not know
how to mix
feelings with meanings

to show it how
is a simple
now
tell it time
is not blind
it sees
even when it finds it has not got a mind

YesNo
08-30-2015, 02:29 PM
I liked the sound of this and the idea of love not being able to mix feelings with meanings.

cacian
08-31-2015, 06:27 AM
YesNo thank you for reading :)

PeterL
08-31-2015, 08:16 AM
Delicious, but love is a constant. It never stop. It just moves on. It is the meaning in feelings.

cacian
08-31-2015, 10:18 AM
Delicious, but love is a constant. It never stop. It just moves on. It is the meaning in feelings.

Peter thank you
love is constant but not always abundant
it varies in quantities when it lacks qualities

PeterL
08-31-2015, 02:51 PM
Peter thank you
love is constant but not always abundant
it varies in quantities when it lacks qualities

If it isn't abundant, then one is in the wrong situation.