39139
07-22-2015, 09:06 AM
I have an idea for a story but I'm not much of the writer so I wondered if anyone could help me improve my story and writing skills by reading what i have done so far
*NOTE*
most of the creatures were my creation and some stuff may not be realistic but hey its a fiction after all
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Title Virus: 39139
In 2045 man had worked hard in advance genetics to bring dinosaurs back to life making this one of the history’s greatest feats. In 2178 the first ever genetically modified man was created and cloned his name was subject 301. In 3100 a start of a apocalypse had begun subject 301 also known as 3 created a virus known as Virus type: 39139 this virus put man on the brink of extinction, the virus mutated every organism on earth. The UN (United Nation) put together 3 massive fortresses that would stand as a beacon of safety for all humans.
5 years later......
Wind would gush past Theron’s face it was really unpleasant as it was winter. Theron could hear the call of a familiar voice in the distant, “Theron come all the rations are going to go”, the voice was Theron’s only close friend Carson, Theron approaches Carson with a blank expression on his face, “were you staring at the sky again Theron? You know you’re not just going to fly to the sky fortress buddy you have to work down here to get there you know”, Theron looks at Carson and pulls a little smile, “or we could join the military and if were good enough who knows we might even become a Hunter”,
“Don’t think like that man the only thing the military will do is send you a ticket to death you won’t even reach the rank of a hunter and you definitely won’t be part of hunter league 1”, Theron and Carson continue to the market to get their daily rations, food was hard in the winter typically in earth fortress cargo planes would usually crash cause of Ragnon’s in the sky attacking them, every once in a while though earth fortress would get Hunters coming in for wall breaches or level 6 threats hanging around the wall. While Theron and Carson were taking their share of ration a hooded figure approached Theron, “take this and don’t tell anyone”, the hooded figure disappears in the crowd,
“Wait who are you”, Theron shouts but the figure never returned. He is now puzzled with a strange runic stone in his hand, “what was that also what did she give you”,
“How do you know it was a girl?”
“Not that hard you know with her giant breasts an-“
“Never mind I even asked”
The main gates of the fortress opened with a group of five on hover bikes and massive weaponry on their backs,” look at that it’s the Hunter league 1 after we just talked about those guy’s briefly”, Carson points at one of the Hunters with a massive hammer on his back he also was wearing a blue and yellow cloak. Theron walks in the midst of the crowd to get a better look, “what are hunters doing here?” the crowd started spreading rumours of a legendary beast lurking near the fortress called Kyrinok. One of the Hunters stood on top of a ration crate he had to long swords hanging from his waist he also wore a black cloak with gold outlines and had basic Fengar hide padding, “don’t panic everyone we have got Intel that tells us that a large swarm of mutants are approaching the south of the fortress. We have been deployed to evacuate all citizens of earth fortress, spread the word and take refuge in the underground tunnels there a path lies to the coast where you will find evac ships to sea fortress”,
“Why would they send the top Hunters to evacuate earth fortress?”
“Beats me Theron now come on unless you want to be mutant bait”
*NOTE*
most of the creatures were my creation and some stuff may not be realistic but hey its a fiction after all
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Title Virus: 39139
In 2045 man had worked hard in advance genetics to bring dinosaurs back to life making this one of the history’s greatest feats. In 2178 the first ever genetically modified man was created and cloned his name was subject 301. In 3100 a start of a apocalypse had begun subject 301 also known as 3 created a virus known as Virus type: 39139 this virus put man on the brink of extinction, the virus mutated every organism on earth. The UN (United Nation) put together 3 massive fortresses that would stand as a beacon of safety for all humans.
5 years later......
Wind would gush past Theron’s face it was really unpleasant as it was winter. Theron could hear the call of a familiar voice in the distant, “Theron come all the rations are going to go”, the voice was Theron’s only close friend Carson, Theron approaches Carson with a blank expression on his face, “were you staring at the sky again Theron? You know you’re not just going to fly to the sky fortress buddy you have to work down here to get there you know”, Theron looks at Carson and pulls a little smile, “or we could join the military and if were good enough who knows we might even become a Hunter”,
“Don’t think like that man the only thing the military will do is send you a ticket to death you won’t even reach the rank of a hunter and you definitely won’t be part of hunter league 1”, Theron and Carson continue to the market to get their daily rations, food was hard in the winter typically in earth fortress cargo planes would usually crash cause of Ragnon’s in the sky attacking them, every once in a while though earth fortress would get Hunters coming in for wall breaches or level 6 threats hanging around the wall. While Theron and Carson were taking their share of ration a hooded figure approached Theron, “take this and don’t tell anyone”, the hooded figure disappears in the crowd,
“Wait who are you”, Theron shouts but the figure never returned. He is now puzzled with a strange runic stone in his hand, “what was that also what did she give you”,
“How do you know it was a girl?”
“Not that hard you know with her giant breasts an-“
“Never mind I even asked”
The main gates of the fortress opened with a group of five on hover bikes and massive weaponry on their backs,” look at that it’s the Hunter league 1 after we just talked about those guy’s briefly”, Carson points at one of the Hunters with a massive hammer on his back he also was wearing a blue and yellow cloak. Theron walks in the midst of the crowd to get a better look, “what are hunters doing here?” the crowd started spreading rumours of a legendary beast lurking near the fortress called Kyrinok. One of the Hunters stood on top of a ration crate he had to long swords hanging from his waist he also wore a black cloak with gold outlines and had basic Fengar hide padding, “don’t panic everyone we have got Intel that tells us that a large swarm of mutants are approaching the south of the fortress. We have been deployed to evacuate all citizens of earth fortress, spread the word and take refuge in the underground tunnels there a path lies to the coast where you will find evac ships to sea fortress”,
“Why would they send the top Hunters to evacuate earth fortress?”
“Beats me Theron now come on unless you want to be mutant bait”