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Mohammad Ahmad
07-14-2015, 02:12 AM
Ramadan comes, I ought to apologize
My sins are more, hurrying to optimize
Where are my grandfathers
Where are the honest kings
All them died and nothing are worth
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I saw my mother's smile where I left
In her orchard where she slept
O, she was in heaven since I born
I took her sins since that nice morn
O, God tell me in secret, can I be saved?
Your Hell is enough to be enraged
While your heaven already for poor opened
Here my tongue asks you as a slave
Nothing it commits but just a slip
Forgive me God, forgive me once
I am inclined to you please enhance

YesNo
07-14-2015, 07:22 AM
I especially liked the two lines about your mother being in heaven and you taking her sins at birth.

Mohammad Ahmad
10-06-2015, 08:17 PM
Thank you YesNo, please excuse me for late reply, we lost the connection with internet for several months ago and if not the time is past a midnight I can't find a way for connection
Your comment is good, yes we all got in sin but it is very amusable taking further burden of others after reading fashionable story, now the story is found everywhere but we can't find the story which can be suitable for many societies