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sympathygrl
06-13-2015, 06:09 AM
Story of the little sunshine
That lighted up your muse,
You told me I was the color red
And you the most beautiful canvas in the blue
I could light you up,
You told me I was the gleam in you
I stayed true to my shade,
But you wanted green and yellow too.

angliholic
06-13-2015, 06:11 AM
You've posted this poem two times

YesNo
06-13-2015, 12:13 PM
I liked the poem. The word "shade" and "light" hint of a coming conflict. His also wanting green and yellow adds the unexpected at the end.