time

[cacian]

why time fly?

because
it does not long
wishing for a song
to appear
near
which is slow
and flung

it is quick

to learn
from its wants
is
swift and strong
and does not feel
wrong

exactly what
life is about
guilt free
and consciously

[mahmod qabaga]

I stay in your field to refresh my time

after suffering

we need a wonderful poem same as your time


time affect our life direction and our choice


thank for you
my dear poet

[YesNo]

Nice poem. I liked the explanation in the third line. It was not what I expected and it threw my mind off just enough and then the rest of the poem flew by to the final stanza talking about life.

[cacian]

thank you both very much for reading :)

[Melanie]

I like how your words flow smoothly like the ticking of a clock, and beautiful thoughts of passing time like a song.

[Adolescent09]

cacian!!!!! I always appreciate your palatable morsels of poetic deliciousness!

[cacian]

I like how your words flow smoothly like the ticking of a clock, and beautiful thoughts of passing time like a song.


cacian!!!!! I always appreciate your palatable morsels of poetic deliciousness!

thank you both very much for reading :)