Mien
06-02-2015, 10:43 AM
Nor knowledge was lost and the gross life I don't need, I had grasped this and that and recalling the genuine plops of my past.
It is comprehensive history, none of which had to be complex or to be exaggerated for my satisfaction. My mother was a
mother and the father was a man in suits holding those-leather suitcases, what more can I tell? When I was across in the
midst of cold winter between two street lamps while holding a knifed bread loaf, it was time to rain but it really didn't. It
was foggy and cold, outside of a shopping district, on a Wednesday, in the closed shopping district came across blackness.
But don't presumpt this blackness as a symbolical image.
This was a fantasy for me, the miracle of my life and the sun for my soul in the cold, she was a black small nimbler in
her walk. It was on four pouncers of three paws that arose out of the dialectic performers. It was one of those trio whisk-
ers on my left eyes that mocked my curiosity in a personal concept you may not understand. "Meow" Says I who was a t-
errible clown, and the furry curiosity turned around and faced me replying "....." With a hazardous glare that hurt my feelings,
she was a furry shifter with chilling harmonic green eyes and a strike off with a heavily opacitated jades around her observators
curiously as if she's installing my features. I'm the child of boredom, the town child who cannot benefit anyone except for being k-
nown.
Thank you Cecilia my deary blonde keeper, but I will cut loose and you will never know why I suddenly lose interest in you. Then,
the cat ran away.
UNDER CONSTRUCTION AKA LAZED OUT
The writing is rushed, it literally gave me a mind bend. Especially the first paragraph, it's an absolute mess. Just try reading it with your mouth, It might help for some of you readers. I'm not applying to academic language deliberately coz im different-coz im different yo.
I would wish to make a more powerful and comprehensive writing, but I just don't have the free time. Could've been much better, so I'll make a proper version and stuff in the season holidays which is like in 3 or 4 weeks and finish up this kid's nonsense. I'm practicing to write for a proper story about a boy and a black cat. I know I can't write like a cool guy yet, but learning and experience is what I got to do for now.
So, anyone got a clue how to make the paragraph grouping equal? Like a normal book, and it has to look good for the sake of reading proudly. No one ever talks about it.
It is comprehensive history, none of which had to be complex or to be exaggerated for my satisfaction. My mother was a
mother and the father was a man in suits holding those-leather suitcases, what more can I tell? When I was across in the
midst of cold winter between two street lamps while holding a knifed bread loaf, it was time to rain but it really didn't. It
was foggy and cold, outside of a shopping district, on a Wednesday, in the closed shopping district came across blackness.
But don't presumpt this blackness as a symbolical image.
This was a fantasy for me, the miracle of my life and the sun for my soul in the cold, she was a black small nimbler in
her walk. It was on four pouncers of three paws that arose out of the dialectic performers. It was one of those trio whisk-
ers on my left eyes that mocked my curiosity in a personal concept you may not understand. "Meow" Says I who was a t-
errible clown, and the furry curiosity turned around and faced me replying "....." With a hazardous glare that hurt my feelings,
she was a furry shifter with chilling harmonic green eyes and a strike off with a heavily opacitated jades around her observators
curiously as if she's installing my features. I'm the child of boredom, the town child who cannot benefit anyone except for being k-
nown.
Thank you Cecilia my deary blonde keeper, but I will cut loose and you will never know why I suddenly lose interest in you. Then,
the cat ran away.
UNDER CONSTRUCTION AKA LAZED OUT
The writing is rushed, it literally gave me a mind bend. Especially the first paragraph, it's an absolute mess. Just try reading it with your mouth, It might help for some of you readers. I'm not applying to academic language deliberately coz im different-coz im different yo.
I would wish to make a more powerful and comprehensive writing, but I just don't have the free time. Could've been much better, so I'll make a proper version and stuff in the season holidays which is like in 3 or 4 weeks and finish up this kid's nonsense. I'm practicing to write for a proper story about a boy and a black cat. I know I can't write like a cool guy yet, but learning and experience is what I got to do for now.
So, anyone got a clue how to make the paragraph grouping equal? Like a normal book, and it has to look good for the sake of reading proudly. No one ever talks about it.