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Parfington
06-01-2015, 01:09 PM
She looked at me for a moment locked in time
eyes, emerald gilded sunspots through shattered glass,
this ore a boon, alloyed spirit held at length,
winds of change spewed from Eden's maw,
eyes now further than the stars littering the empty sky,
those eyes, now sultry soil.

sweetcaroline
06-04-2015, 02:14 AM
If I could favorite a post, I would totally favorite this.

tailor STATELY
06-04-2015, 09:54 AM
Welcome to you both.

Enjoyed this poem as well. Short, yet dense in description and mood and emotion.

@ Kelly Keener: There is a thread of favorite poems from litnet contributors that you can post to in the Personal Poems forum... I believe it is a sticky.

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY