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NewSecret
05-01-2015, 11:00 PM
I waited a long time for this day

when all my projects were finished

and our town could be ready to face

that spirit we only know as the

"Entity."



Now that I created a weapon that

can end the "Entity", I am now

handing this over to you, as you

are one of a few people in our town

with a physical and mental

endurance great enough to overcome

the "Entity." Before I hand this

sacred item of advanced technology

to you, I will once more tell you

the Tale of the Risen Entity so

your mind can hold a fresh vision

of what you will face. You've not

seen the "Entity" but I'd seen

the "Entity" and I can assure you,

the "Entity" is a fierce spirit.



The "Entity" had risen out of a cave

near the mines. All the miners had

to abandon the mines because a few

of the miners died. A few survivors

saw it in the shadows of the mines,

describing the "Entity" as the

heighth of two men and the width of

two bears. They said the "Entity"

could dissolve into the mine walls

like oil dissolves into dirt. A

residue was left behind that they

could not account for.



They said the "Entity" was brutal,

tearing miners in two with one

swipe of hidden hands.



This was the tale told me when I

was a young boy and I couldn't

believe it. Then one day, when you

were a young boy, the "Entity"

attacked our town and killed

hundreds of people.



I saw the "Entity" with my own

eyes, ugly and animal-like, of a

great size exactly as the miners

described in their account.

The "Entity" had random tufts of

hair and fur all over his body and

long teeth that his mouth couldn't

contain. The "Entity" drooled and

sputtered with a short breath like

there was ooze in his throat.

The "Entity" had no eyes, but a

group of horns across the forehead

and face where eyes should be.



The "Entity" ran with the speed of

a horse and I watched him throw men

onto rooftops and throw them into

trees. I was cautious, finding

safety for my family in our barn

and I held my ground at a barn

door as I watched the "Entity"

terrorize the town. Anyone who ran

my way I hid them away in our barn.



Now, the time is here for you to

kill the "Entity" and here is the

weapon that we finally can say will

definitely tear the "Entity" apart.

Now go on, fierce warrior, and save

our town from further suffering.





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Neilson Black
05-11-2015, 06:20 AM
Whatever the entity is seems something you don't want to mess with. This piece kind of told us everything in the form of a poem. If that was the intention, it was nice.