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cacian
05-01-2015, 06:23 AM
through art
we can see
mars
the moon
the stars
because
to paint them
a sky
high
is by
far
an image
wise
that limits
the human lies
that Kilimanjaro
to a sparrow
is an arrow
it lands
shallow
one side too narrow
apart
eroses
and
further
closes

North Star
05-01-2015, 06:24 AM
'eroses'?

cacian
05-01-2015, 06:30 AM
'eroses'?

hi North Star
maybe arises?
eroses from erosion

i did find a link
http://www.thefreedictionary.com/erose

North Star
05-01-2015, 06:38 AM
It's your bunch of words, so you decide.
What erosion does is to erode. Erose seems to be a fine word though, and I don't mind you using it as a verb.
"the human lies" or "the human lives"?

cacian
05-01-2015, 11:37 AM
It's your bunch of words, so you decide.
What erosion does is to erode. Erose seems to be a fine word though, and I don't mind you using it as a verb.
"the human lies" or "the human lives"?

human lies.
i could not use lives haha :)