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cacian
04-22-2015, 07:37 AM
walking up
the aisle
in a wedding style
what goes up
the mind
is something divine
the bride finds
it is unnerving
what the organ is serving
a plate of full of curvings
the murals
plural
to hear so much
choral
they want a different moral

Scheherazade
04-22-2015, 07:43 AM
I am a confident poetry reader but I am stumped here. Do you mean "aisle" as "isle" is an island?

cacian
04-22-2015, 07:50 AM
I am a confident poetry reader but I am stumped here. Do you mean "aisle" as "isle" is an island?

oh you are right !!!!
aisle
i meant aisle
i could not find the spelling
let see if i can change it.
thanks for that :)

Scheherazade
04-22-2015, 05:28 PM
Yes, that reads much better now! :p

YesNo
04-22-2015, 08:18 PM
I liked the lines: "it is unnerving/what the organ is serving".

cacian
04-23-2015, 05:28 AM
Yes, that reads much better now! :p

indeed :)

cacian
04-23-2015, 05:29 AM
I liked the lines: "it is unnerving/what the organ is serving".

thank you YesNo.:)