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Mohammad Ahmad
04-17-2015, 07:43 AM
Don't blame
I have a heart and notion
I am a part of flesh and blood
In my heart yet there is a shelter
Once you came
Once on feet retreated
Once my pigeon sang for you
Once the sparrows came satisfied
Ran over my heart and came down
To draw the map of our love
Henceforth still you read
Lines estimated within sorrow
A migrated fun never is mine
And you are the tree where I found
Came awhile to borrow
The red grapes of my orchard
Whether in autumn or early winter
Still there is grape sticking on my shelter

NikolaiI
04-19-2015, 11:54 AM
This is for sure the best I've seen of yours up to today. Very nice!

I read it twice. . I especially like the imagery of all of it; not much else to say but great job.

Mohammad Ahmad
04-19-2015, 04:04 PM
Thank you Nikolail for coming back and read, anyway it is just emotion I meant someone not to blame, however, blaming not always is in the right way
thank you dear fellow