Red Glider

[miyako73]

It's your color
that makes me
follow after you.

We pass the lake,
the mango tree,
then you stop.

You bring me
to the red tulip;
now I'm so torn.

[cacian]

red glider
is that a play on words?

i like these little poems miyako
i can read them
i don't like long pieces
there is something attractive about small offerings isn't there?
this piece is descriptive and poignant at the end. :)

[NikolaiI]

Really nice. I am a big fan of minimalist poetry too.