pretty prayer

[cacian]

god may wait
on those whose
faith upheaves
superstition leaves
empty believes

words come to me!!!
for i am sucker to thee
i need to be
because i see
and so you say:
plenty is to me!

[YesNo]

I enjoyed the sound and sense of this.

[NikolaiI]

'Before you go to sleep,
Say a little prayer,
Every day in every way,
It's getting better and better,

Beautiful,
Beautiful, beautiful,
Beautiful Boy,

Out on the ocean sailing away,
I can hardly wait,
To see you to come of age,
But I guess we'll both,
Just have to be patient,
Yes it's a long way to go,
But in the meantime,

Before you cross the street,
Take my hand,
Life is just what happens to you,
While your busy making other plans'

Beautiful Boy (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Wfx2JjFH2nY) by John Lennon

(w/o the vid to save bandwidth)

[cacian]

ResNo and Nikolail thank you for reading and comments.
Nikolail the piece is a lovely read :)

[colb2]

Excellent as always Cacian, not a better ending than "plenty is to me"!! I always look forward to the end of a poem kind of like a movie and this does it for me :)