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axolotl
04-03-2015, 04:51 AM
my love is rose
my heart is a rose
my heart is a house
when my love lives

my love is loveable
my house is houseable
my love is the most loved
of all the hearted hearts


please my love
love my house
love my rose
be my rose and will be
the sweetest kiss
the sweetest rose
the sweetest heart
the perfect wife


II

The most perfect flower is a girl
who knows how to please her man


III

My mouth was manufactured
only to kiss you

my eyes was manufactured
only to see you

IV

poems are so easy
one just need a true sentiment


V

I'm blonde
I'm beautiful
you will be my husband

VI
Touching you is like touch the sky
I love you so deeply I can't deny


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YesNo
04-03-2015, 07:40 AM
I liked the second stanza with the loveable love and the houseable house and hearted hearts.

NikolaiI
04-03-2015, 03:18 PM
Very beautiful, epecially when I think of the speaker being the Earth..