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miyako73
03-29-2015, 04:02 PM
In front of him—
archer,
oarsman
wearing a cotton loincloth—
I hesitated
then shied away.

The scissors
sharp like his other blades—
sword,
dagger—
were unwilling
before the white chrysanthemum.

cacian
03-31-2015, 11:09 AM
this is an intriguing piece
it is almost surreal but then miyako73 all your work is which gives it an own flavour .

the last line is rather captivating :)