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cacian
03-26-2015, 02:24 PM
the penicle of a feeling
is to amuse
and has a meaning
a direction
a reading
soemthing to hold on
to for a steering
in case to conduct
is abduct
it is otherwise
needing
limited
can make it
edited
easy turns
difficult
and seeing
turns
fleeing
complex goes
duplex
impossible reflex
that is
why
it only asks
to keep
it above the mast
a horizon with a rhaps
a view it likes
in order to see past
anything after that
is a blast

NikolaiI
03-26-2015, 10:44 PM
This was beautiful. . it seems, like a lot of yours, to be about spiritual breakthrough. Or in other words, making what is difficult easy. Like, the rhythm of life, where you get it down to an art, and then you get glimpses of what is beyond. Was that close?

mahmod qabaga
03-27-2015, 12:11 AM
i see you in this post , like a penicle that open our life

cacian
03-27-2015, 01:53 PM
Nikolail thank you very much.
yes i agree i think i like to write about what is not obvious.
i guess it is easier to have a guess then to see it all at once. :)


mahmod your words are very kind
thank you very much for reading :)