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cacian
03-24-2015, 03:27 PM
ah
longevity...
if I ask it
to stop
it will
levity
brevity
you guys
don't know
how to be!
NikolaiI
03-25-2015, 10:24 PM
brava, cacian :)
YesNo
03-26-2015, 08:34 AM
The last three lines made a lot of sense and the sound linking back of "be" to "longevity", "brevity" and "levity" held the whole thing together.
cacian
03-26-2015, 02:14 PM
thank you both very much :)