As a figureless orchard

[Mohammad Ahmad]

As a fever hits me all side
I can't stand on my feet
Once I stepped on entering my room
Feeling the ceiling as if a circulating train
I turn collapsed onto my bed
And hardly could I move
Something as a dream came on my thoughts
As a figureless orchard having no rose
I installed my dream in my mind again
Figuring as much as I feel
But the orchard comes to my mind again
As several yokes going to farm
I arranged my thoughts to help myself
Remedial emotion retrieved at once
Thinking that all people are one
But the majority are heartless
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[YesNo]

I liked the last two lines. I wasn't expecting that "heartless" ending after being told "all people are one". Also the "figureless orchard having no rose" made me pause. An orchard probably wouldn't have a rose in it and why would it be figureless, but it seemed to fit.

[NikolaiI]

You are writing much more beautifully my friend, at least it seems to me.

It is good to see you and your poem.

[Mohammad Ahmad]

As long as I am still alive between you and communicating through the online-literature, let me spilling out a bit of my imagination as far as the occasion could help me since I gathered myself if I could be able to offering slight but delight promises for a new technique in poetry.
After four years or more of writing poetry, I find that the English gradually becomes my tongue in expressing emotions.
I thank you always YesNo for your good sharing notices
Finally yet importantly, I would forgive you all to excuse me now and exactly in these days due to my particular circumstances.
Yes it would be alike as you said " beholding a manner of a pause" there it must be pauses in poetry and somehow pauses for returning to oneself.

To Nikolail I welcome you again to come back finding enjoyment on my writing style
Thank you all sweet members

[Mohammad Ahmad]

I hardly opened the page the current internet is too weak to be communicating; I find it is impossible to stay more even my email in yahoo and two days before it is being not responded as well as the messages I received here I couldn’t open to read because it takes a long time to be opened.
That's our condition in Iraq
Thank you again both friends

[NikolaiI]

Sometimes I don't think I could ever possibly understand fear.

It has seemed so clear to me since birth that it is not a desired emotion,

so at that all that remains is working for love, life, light, to know peace.

To share it and find it, to find it and share it -

this has seemed to be the one law above all others in existence;

that from the first instant it is our duty to preach -

not in a previous way of preaching but as the same way the birds sing -

this is life, all of life, in one moment and instant -

we are - all souls - together - one.

But emotions and philosophies aside -

It's about reprogramming the machine -

of the collective consciousness of all life -

to know that all life is sacred, and valued -

My own life is the same as yours, dear friend -

no higher, no lower, not equal -

merely another instant flash of light.

Thank you for your life, for your light,

and telling your story.

You are my friend.

Always, and ever.

Love, and love alone, rules my heart and never

Not once ever

did I forget.



You do have friends that care,

that know you

and love you,

dear friend.

[NikolaiI]

All of our tears - are one.
All of our life - is one.

[Mohammad Ahmad]

all of our tears - are one
all of our life - is one
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It should be a sacrifice for one's son
To be a pleasure in a midst of fun
How to claim we are one?
Couple of souls in atmosphere run

Thanks