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cacian
03-20-2015, 03:06 PM
love
an extract
of happyness
diluted
rather nice
microscopic
writes
is to the
height
the principal
of light
to hold
it
requires
a gentle
slide
so to show it
off
wont hide

free
03-21-2015, 05:49 AM
I like your poem, cacian.

Here is an illustration of its title.... :smile5:

http://s18.postimg.org/z4de79m7p/2015_New_Hot_Selling_Fashion_Happy_Hormone_Serot.j pg (http://postimg.org/image/z4de79m7p/)

cacian
03-21-2015, 06:13 AM
free this is really cool :)
thank you.
i like the idea of shapes to illustrate feeling it kind of makes it tangible/real.

YesNo
03-21-2015, 09:10 AM
I liked the idea in the first four lines of love being a diluted extract of "happyness". Normally that is spelled "happiness", but it may be better this way. I also liked free's necklace.

cacian
03-23-2015, 09:44 AM
I liked the idea in the first four lines of love being a diluted extract of "happyness". Normally that is spelled "happiness", but it may be better this way. I also liked free's necklace.

YesNo thank you.
I agree free's necklaces are nice :)