the cosmos distirct

[cacian]

in the shadows
behind the sun's
arrows
is a special
light

it appears only
when everything is white
that is not the night
or midnight

it is dawn's height
when the stars return
to excite
the common
blight
the cosmos quite

it is not evident
to the naked eye retiscent
but obvious
to any copious
amount of daylight
the sky
sprays slight
so
looking down
is bright

to never feel hide
appearance is everything
you need to a sight

[free]

Nice poem, cacian. I love cosmos inspired literature.

[cacian]

Nice poem, cacian. I love cosmos inspired literature.

free thank you for reading.
:)

[YesNo]

I liked the last two lines about "appearance" and the whole sound of this.

[NikolaiI]

I like it a lot too, initially it reminds me of "way behind the sun" by pentangle. . .

then again everything by Space and Les Rockets :)

In a snippet of poetry a while ago I referred to earth as "galacto-sphere," just sort of. . an interesting way of looking at it.

Once, when I was younger, I was quite surprised when I realized - we're as much connected to the sun as we possibly could be. Where do you draw the boundary of the sun - at its surface? Where its heat ends? Where its light ends? Most of these definitions include us within the sun -

Just an interesting thing I always thought :)

[cacian]

I liked the last two lines about "appearance" and the whole sound of this.

TesNo thank you for reading :)

[cacian]

I like it a lot too, initially it reminds me of "way behind the sun" by pentangle. . .

then again everything by Space and Les Rockets :)

In a snippet of poetry a while ago I referred to earth as "galacto-sphere," just sort of. . an interesting way of looking at it.

Once, when I was younger, I was quite surprised when I realized - we're as much connected to the sun as we possibly could be. Where do you draw the boundary of the sun - at its surface? Where its heat ends? Where its light ends? Most of these definitions include us within the sun -

Just an interesting thing I always thought :)

Nikolail thank you so much for the interesting feeback.
pentangle sounds interesting.
i think nature and us and more related then we think to question it is to question us :)

[NikolaiI]

You're welcome! I thought maybe I should have left it at the mention of the "Way Behind the Sun"

but I'm glad I said a bit more then. :)