Poems?

[Deveroux]

Regret

I came to you in a shape of exquisite beauty,
Youthful face of a faun peeked out from a foliage
of your flowering Persian garden fostered by the hellenic Sun.
I know there are some paths which lead us out from a light
into the dark night of the soul.

[YesNo]

Interesting. The "dark night of the soul", "hellenic", "flowering Persian garden", "exquisite beauty" may need to be explained more because they are too familiar and yet unknown. I liked the alliteration between "faun" and "foliage".

The idea of going "out from a light into the dark" and the title make me think there is some distress, but I don't know what it is.

Welcome! I hope to read more of your poetry.

[DieterM]

I second YesNo by saying "Hello and welcome", and I do agree that these few lines leave me with more questions than certainties. Which, as far as I'm concerned, is a very good thing. Your poem read a bit like something Rimbaud might have written, had be taken the fancy to write in English. I particularly liked your first line "I came to you in a shape of exquisite beauty", although (there has to be a quibble, otherwise it's not funny, lol) I'd have used "the shape' instead of "a shape".
Oh yes, and definitely do post some more!