I Wish You All the Best

[free]

I wish you all the best
Seeing that you've made your love nest

I hope you are happier than before
Now that you are alone no more

Live a long and joyful life
With your, finally, found wife

[cacian]

a very nice read.
like a postcard :)

[free]

a very nice read.
like a postcard :)

Thank you, cacian. Nice to see you again! :)

[cacian]

Thank you, cacian. Nice to see you again! :)

thank you.
i enjoyed reading this piece it is the kind of literature that perhaps deserve framing and putting on a wall :D

[free]

thank you.
i enjoyed reading this piece it is the kind of literature that perhaps deserve framing and putting on a wall :D

:) Yes, it is supposed to be something like that, a greeting card for wedding.

[cacian]

:) Yes, it is supposed to be something like that, a greeting card for wedding.

i see. it is rather poignant but to the point. :)

[free]

i see. it is rather poignant but to the point. :)

Thank you, cacian, for being so perspicacious to feel what is not said, but...


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...let my lonelines touches not his finally found happiness. :)

[free]

I saw you gambling with your honey
Maybe you two need more money

Or just doing it for fun
When there is nothing else to be done

Have a good luck, too
Whatever you do

[YesNo]

Nice set of couplets about a couple. The "Have a good luck" sounds odd, maybe just "Good luck".

[free]

Nice set of couplets about a couple. The "Have a good luck" sounds odd, maybe just "Good luck".

Thank you, YesNo. Maybe you're right, but to me it sounds better like I've put it, the rythm is better, the number of syllables makes it more appropriate. At least, to my ears. :)

But, anyway, I don't think that the 'he' will read this. No point in making it too perfect. :biggrin5: