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MystyrMystyry
02-18-2015, 11:31 PM
As night falls
The full moon glows
In a shroud of cloud
And the crickets
And the owls
And the bats
Warn of The Doom

Dark mist rising
It's low and slow
With an appetite
For feet
For ankles
For knees
Creeping in its gloom

When you see
Run! Like a bullet from a gun!
The door unlock!
Slam behind!
Check the window!
Beeline to bed!
Safe in your room

Burn a candle
As long as a song
All through the night
Don't close your eyes
Don't dare sleep
Don't even peek

At The Crawling Doom

YesNo
02-19-2015, 11:10 AM
Nice eerie sound to this one, MystyrMystyry.

AuntShecky
02-19-2015, 04:07 PM
We don't often see a two-beat line. Makes the message urgent. Nice work.

MystyrMystyry
02-22-2015, 06:09 PM
Thankyou YesNo :)

MystyrMystyry
02-22-2015, 06:10 PM
Thankyou Aunty :)

(Thought I'd try something sweet and short after the recent rather epic efforts)

Delta40
02-22-2015, 06:24 PM
Gonna scare the grandies with this one....

MystyrMystyry
02-25-2015, 06:20 AM
Maybe ...

Thankyou Delta :)