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miyako73
02-15-2015, 07:09 PM
The kettle whistled
the aroma of burn and black
filling the kitchen
plagued with the odor
of molds and bagged trash
I would not touch
or shoot into the bin
because the words of the poet
now hateful and bitter
rang in my ears
like old bells tolling
before death and coffee.

Diego Moreno
02-16-2015, 07:00 PM
I can see certain symetry in thyn werds

YesNo
02-16-2015, 07:19 PM
I sometimes need that first cup of coffee to get the day going. What words was the poet saying?

miyako73
02-17-2015, 11:02 PM
Yes, Diego, the poem is about symmetry-- the real (life--coffee to start the day) and the imagined (death--coffee during the wake). YesNo, that hateful poet keeps on nagging with these words, "kill yourself." Thanks for reading.