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DieterM
02-03-2015, 11:24 AM
I should have known better
than to fall in love
with the image you had of me:
that of the tall, lean guy
in the smart suit
amused smile on his lips,
right eyebrow raised,
the guy who’s standing at the piano
where someone’s playing
the Rachmaninov-Prelude No. 4 in D major,
the guy moving his foot up and down
in time to the music.
That guy existed
maybe.
But fifteen failed relationships ago.

Jerrybaldy
02-04-2015, 07:17 PM
I feel a definite affinity to your style of writing Dieter

Jerrybaldy
02-04-2015, 07:18 PM
I always enjoy reading you and feel you are bare in your expression all good

DieterM
02-05-2015, 05:13 AM
Why, thank you Jerrybaldy (I'm blushing as I type). Same's true here re. your writing—that is, when I'm fast enough to read it before you delete it LOL ;-)
Btw, I don't know if you happened upon this thread, you should have a look at it because it concerns you. http://www.online-literature.com/forums/showthread.php?81149-Happy-b-day-Jerrybaldy!