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Lykren
01-28-2015, 03:32 PM
What did it mean before this,
our prism’s unfolding
into blue-tinged clouds,
if what it meant was meaning?

Thoughts stray from their creator,
omnipotency reduced to a clear
hard glass through which everything
is visible, distant and unreachable.

Solid forms assemble in soft fog,
relating implausible messages,
and what will I believe

if not your empty face, flushed
with dreaming, sad with marriage?

NikolaiI
01-28-2015, 04:45 PM
Very good!

Reminds me of a lot of things, including the Zen koan - "From where you are, stop the distant boat moving across the water."

Lykren
01-28-2015, 06:53 PM
Thanks NikolaiI. Interesting comparison!

NikolaiI
01-28-2015, 08:26 PM
You're welcome, friend.