Hello,anyone new member.I have a very short story,please give me feedback.Thank you!

[DeadMan40]

On the ride home from school Peggy know she was in big trouble.Her parents didn't say much, which really surprised Peggy Lou.But she figured they were just waiting to get home before they gave it to her with both barrels.But another thought came to mind, after all this wasn't the first time Peggy had gotten into trouble at school or at home for at matter .Maybe her parents were just use to her antics.But the more she thought about it, at her age that was probably more than anything else wishful thinking.Peggy deep down inside know she should have been sorry for putting glue and glitter in amanda's hair.But she wasn't ,after all she knew Amanda deserved it for bullying and picking on her because of her freckles which she loved so much.Peggy had gotten more than enough abuse from her older sister because of her freckles and she wasn't going to take it from Amanda.Her archenemy ,punishment or no punishhment.

[YesNo]

There are spelling and grammar mistakes that are easy to fix, such as "Peggy know" and "punishhment". Also, I would put a space between the period and the first letter of the next sentence and break the single paragraph story into multiple paragraphs with white lines separating the paragraphs to make the text easier to read.

Regarding the story itself, I think it has just begun. We know Peggy put glue and glitter into a classmate's hair. She has some lame excuse for doing so. That sets up the conflict that now needs to be developed and resolved.

Welcome! I hope to read more stories from you. I am no expert at writing. So, feel free to ignore my comments.