Two poems.

[Bjornnesss]

I lust for sharing of these two poems I have created. Please, feedback will be much appreciated.

The day when the water sparkled
The day when the sun shone like the brightness of my heart

That was the day when I saw the seed
The seed that planted a new life in me

Happiness sprouted from that seed
A new life of wonders and joy

Thus, the water kept flowing
and the sun kept shining

The seed became one within me
Intertwined by the warmth of my heart

Forever together it may have seemed
Forever Loneliness and sadness has ceased

But when the waters stopped flowing
and the sun’s light faded to darkness

The one that I held dear the most
Has now lost it’s source to thrive

Replayed is my depression
Longing for love seems inevitable




Blood spews like water from the faucet
Rotting carcases like a decomposing rat

Slaughtered have they been
No longer can one save thy self

Innards splattered like a baby’s painting
Brains turned to mush like melting plastic

Genocide is understated
Safety and security is overrated

Skin ripped apart like the tearing of paper
Limbs broken like a toothpick

Inevitable is death
Eternal is human suffrage.

[DATo]

Hi Bjornnesss, and welcome to the Lit Net.

I think you might get more response if you posted this poem in the Personal Poetry section - this is the Short Story Sharing Forum.

You can find the Personal Poetry Forum at the link below.

http://www.online-literature.com/forums/forumdisplay.php?14-Personal-Poetry