Revised

[dara.cv]

Memories are rotated
between colored versions of past perceptions and current mood.

The film rewound
Edited, the main character is more likable this time.
The play takes an intermission.
Returns in mid-drama with alternate scenarios.
I’ve heard this story before
Though it seems this is the abridged version.

Who am I?
Copies upon copies of revised manuscripts
The narrator has guided himself within the 3rd person.

[free]

Nice phylosophical thinking in verses with modern metaphors, taking the whole thing from far past into present. I like it. Particularly the point stressed in the closoing lines.


Who am I?
Copies upon copies of revised manuscripts
The narrator has guided himself within the 3rd person.