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Mohammad Ahmad
12-10-2014, 08:01 AM
Someone gave me a rose
I implanted it in my heart
No more and opened a bud
I watered it from my tears
It grew and became a tree
I called it my a friendship tree
No more and it was uprooted
No leaf remains nor does stem
Alas there is no truth in the world
Just deceit and selfism replace
And the woman indeed is the cause
Sometimes she is solemn,
but many times turns rough
Thus, you can't guess where to put feet
As a sun of winter hardly has heat.
Thus you are unsafe to build a relation
And you might think hundred times before
And to take caution especially from those
Or to be the foolish one for the end

Mohammad Ahmad
12-10-2014, 11:59 AM
Now I am finished from checking the poem and I would like everyone could share with me on this because it conveys a true emotion.
The emotion, which it is very hard to discuss on pages, but let me saving it to be my own.
Thank you all for reading and I shall not save any effort unless sharing for the behalf of literature
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MMA- The Iraqi Translator

Mohammad Ahmad
12-10-2014, 12:08 PM
Another poem I like to post now:

The most killer of men

As a nail twinges me inside
A pain which can't be calmed at all
I think this malady to all is familiar
To love someone then you frustrate
To say hi for a woman or to confess
It is likely you go to the war
Either you are killed or severely stabbed
Then you will be sorrowful and vagabond
To those doors which never be opened
Then you are the unlucky where to go
Damn to those arrogant and unkind
I will never repeat this emotion looks dark
And I shall keep my emotion to those reserve
And as I rejected this passion again,
I am of a deep thought and I well know
That battle is never the fate of men
Just women are the killer of them

YALASH
12-11-2014, 01:06 AM
Peace be on you.
It is difficult to accept:
" Alas there is no truth in the world
Just deceit and selfism replace
And the woman indeed is the cause
Sometimes she is solemn,
but many times turns rough"
Men and women are product of same society. What do you think, Friend?

Mohammad Ahmad
12-11-2014, 05:02 AM
Peace be on you.
It is difficult to accept:
" Alas there is no truth in the world
Just deceit and selfism replace
And the woman indeed is the cause
Sometimes she is solemn,
but many times turns rough"
Men and women are product of same society. What do you think, Friend?

thank dear Yalash for reading and sending a comment
what to do dear friend?
We have nothing to satisfy them unless themselves are satisfied
Women are not like us having mind and having something else