A Haiku

[Bjornnesss]

Please give me feedback on these Haikus.
Eternal is love
Two lonely hearts soon conjoin
Life's romantic ways.

Sickness has bit me
Pricking needles do not pay
For now I shall lay.

Nighttime lurks upon
Flee before he awakens
Or you will be gone

[YesNo]

I don't know much about haiku, but I liked your use of end-rhyme in some of them.

[sdave616]

Please give me feedback on these Haikus.
Eternal is love
Two lonely hearts soon conjoin
Life's romantic ways.

Sickness has bit me
Pricking needles do not pay
For now I shall lay.

Nighttime lurks upon
Flee before he awakens
Or you will be gone


I think very well done.

Find true north;
Justice is but a passing wave;
the beach eternal

[sdave616]

do not praise

the man who says less

has more value

[sdave616]

everything is energy;

so , what is good and evil when

universes flow eternal